Csucskos's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Just a test]

It looks great and all but should be finished first. It misses clear lines, colors and much more. You are on the great track keep it up.

BALeFACTOR responds:

I'm aware it's incomplete. Believe me. I would have finished it if I could. Thanks for the feedback.

[Duck Fishing]

The draw quality is pretty fine, but what is happening? We need a story line of some sort. Or maybe just I don't get it :(

[Remixxrz-Stream]

I would not consider this as a video. Please upload it as a music file.

[Skim Milk (animatic)]

The voice acting is fine, or I could say it is funny, but the animation... Where is it? The truth is that the voice acting carries the whole project...
The idea is OK, just the drawings could be more refined.

[Shape Fighter]

The idea is unoriginal, the moves are jittery, the fighting music is out of place. Though the quality is OK.

[The stranger Paradise]

Try to upload it as an audio file.

[JAR media anime opening]

Pretty nice one. The drawing, the music, the action...
I just don't know what is going on. (Mostly fighting I see but who, why and what else?)
Ohh and the teeth could be less detailed in the few closeup shots. They seem odd for me.

SirDraws responds:

Thankyou so much for the feedback, I really agree with all of the mistakes you pointed out but I have some tangible ish reasons why a lot of them exist
1: I made this for the JAR media community who are very familiar with the random scenes in this, you can see where a lot of the things I recreate in this come from in here https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bMSCZg_JD4s though the flow and pacing of it make no sense at all to someone who isn't really a fan, I basically jumped into this thing having no storyboard or anything
2: a lot of the faces are a mixture of copied screenshots and completely made up animation and I wasn't really very experienced with animating so copying felt easier when I could actually look at a screenshot but then made the whole thing very inconsistent.

[Gift Animation]

A nice old song would be good for this old look cartoon.
But the animation is smooth and adorable.
Keep it up.

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This isn't animation. You should put it in voice acting... Otherwise it isn't so bad.

[Derelicts Loon Toon]

I liked the animation but it was too interrupted. I think it was too slow or you didn't have enough frames. The only good parts were the fish-eatings, and when the guy hit the other guy. Otherwise it was OK.