Csucskos's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Just a test]

It looks great and all but should be finished first. It misses clear lines, colors and much more. You are on the great track keep it up.

BALeFACTOR responds:

I'm aware it's incomplete. Believe me. I would have finished it if I could. Thanks for the feedback.

[Duck Fishing]

The draw quality is pretty fine, but what is happening? We need a story line of some sort. Or maybe just I don't get it :(

[Shape Fighter]

The idea is unoriginal, the moves are jittery, the fighting music is out of place. Though the quality is OK.

[JAR media anime opening]

Pretty nice one. The drawing, the music, the action...
I just don't know what is going on. (Mostly fighting I see but who, why and what else?)
Ohh and the teeth could be less detailed in the few closeup shots. They seem odd for me.

SirDraws responds:

Thankyou so much for the feedback, I really agree with all of the mistakes you pointed out but I have some tangible ish reasons why a lot of them exist
1: I made this for the JAR media community who are very familiar with the random scenes in this, you can see where a lot of the things I recreate in this come from in here https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bMSCZg_JD4s though the flow and pacing of it make no sense at all to someone who isn't really a fan, I basically jumped into this thing having no storyboard or anything
2: a lot of the faces are a mixture of copied screenshots and completely made up animation and I wasn't really very experienced with animating so copying felt easier when I could actually look at a screenshot but then made the whole thing very inconsistent.

[Gift Animation]

A nice old song would be good for this old look cartoon.
But the animation is smooth and adorable.
Keep it up.

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This isn't animation. You should put it in voice acting... Otherwise it isn't so bad.

[Derelicts Loon Toon]

I liked the animation but it was too interrupted. I think it was too slow or you didn't have enough frames. The only good parts were the fish-eatings, and when the guy hit the other guy. Otherwise it was OK.