Csucskos's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Just a test]

It looks great and all but should be finished first. It misses clear lines, colors and much more. You are on the great track keep it up.

BALeFACTOR responds:

I'm aware it's incomplete. Believe me. I would have finished it if I could. Thanks for the feedback.

[JAR media anime opening]

Pretty nice one. The drawing, the music, the action...
I just don't know what is going on. (Mostly fighting I see but who, why and what else?)
Ohh and the teeth could be less detailed in the few closeup shots. They seem odd for me.

SirDraws responds:

Thankyou so much for the feedback, I really agree with all of the mistakes you pointed out but I have some tangible ish reasons why a lot of them exist
1: I made this for the JAR media community who are very familiar with the random scenes in this, you can see where a lot of the things I recreate in this come from in here https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bMSCZg_JD4s though the flow and pacing of it make no sense at all to someone who isn't really a fan, I basically jumped into this thing having no storyboard or anything
2: a lot of the faces are a mixture of copied screenshots and completely made up animation and I wasn't really very experienced with animating so copying felt easier when I could actually look at a screenshot but then made the whole thing very inconsistent.

[Sensei Stuff]

Not bad.
It is so funny but in my opinion this animation needs more action in it.
I became boring just because I didn't have anything to watch during the funny conversation.
Anyways, This is good stuff!

sketchnate responds:

cool yeah, I totally get that. what sort of movements would you have them do? maybe even aqua teen style hopping as they move? especially between the intro to the older him and when they start using telepathy.

this was really helpful, thanks

[The Pilot]

This is awesome!
But the music... ehh. It doesn't fit the big actions. Sry.
Anyway not so bad. Keep up the good work.

Dreaminerryday responds:

Haha the direction of the music is kinda my fault. I told the composer "just do what you want, I trust you." I don't know enough about music so I wasn't able to be specific about what kind of sound I wanted to go for. I appreciate the criticism!

[Jetball Trum(B)]

It was quite interesting but you should play it much faster. I think you did a great job but this was boring. Sorry but I have to say this because sometimes I omitted the majority of this video.
Anyway it was nice and you have a big talent I think. And I love this song;)

ToonymanStudios responds:

I think the Music is too relaxing! therefore is why you don't feel to energize towards it! I will keep that in mind for the real series.

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[Nami: Episode 1]

This vide is so interesting and the animation is quite good but sometimes it's... oh... I have to say: It is ugly. For example the girl's breast is poor. At 1:11 her mouth is nasty. The action at 1:40... spinning picture... Her face isn't too good anyway without the kerchief.

Sorry but that's the truth although in general the effects are so good, and the scenes are in a good rhythm. I love that blood scene in the end. The rain with the thunderlights are beautiful. I love these bad guys because they don't have own face. The masks are good.

So good job and keep it up.

CrabbWalker responds:

There are certainly anatomy issues that I'm glad you pointed out. Her face is distorted at times, but I'll make sure to correct these errors in the next animation.