It looks great and all but should be finished first. It misses clear lines, colors and much more. You are on the great track keep it up.

The draw quality is pretty fine, but what is happening? We need a story line of some sort. Or maybe just I don't get it :(

I don't know why I've never left a review here...

Sooo: The game is awesome, the story itself is quite good, and many unexpected things happen. Without going into detail, I hate when the main characters have some kind of magical aura that prevents their death. It makes the reader to care less as they don't have to worry about the heroes. Now here there is no such thing. And it's a big positive for me.

I still think the end ending is pretty cliché, but other than that I'd read/watch/consume/live this story in any other form if there was a non-game version. (Obviously the quizes would not work which is a shame, I love good puzzles.)

Now I have a few minor complaints (other than the ending):

- The partioned relese. I hate it! (Now it's not a problem as the game is fully released, but I hated waiting for every new episode...)

- The standings does not mean anything. (Or I haven't realized yet.)

- The choices does not mean anything. (At least nothing major. I know it's a lot of work and the more far-reaching the branches are the less every player will experience, but I like when my choices matter.)

- The music is pretty boring, there are only a handful of tracks. So I've listened quite a few albums on Bandcamp while playing this game :D

Pretty much this is it. The game was awesome, and however there could have been minor improvements (with the animations or I dunno, other languages?), I enjoyed every second of it! Great job!

This is absolutely unacceptable. The game is extremely short, and really frustrating. The challenges pissed me off even more. And I was expecting something lightharted, or fun, like Upgrade coplete, but no, just a typical platformer. The theme "you broke the game" did not appear anywhere... And as I said, the game is really unforgiving. 1 mistake and you are dead. I beat the game and had no fun. Than did the challenges, but it offered nothing new. No secrets, no interesting gameplay restrictions, nothing. It's truly saddening, that the art and music is really pretty, just as the mechanics, but the gameplay itself... Terrible!

And onw thing: Is this trying to be funny? Bird poo kills you, and the clouds whine... But nothing else... But why can you jump on the side of the birds and not die?! Not well thought out.

Ohh, and a reset button would be pretty nice...

Nice music, responsive controls, straight forward gameplay, progressive difficulty. It could have more levels, with more enemies and challenges, but it's pretty alright overall.

Woot!

I love it! My only complaint is that it's quite repetitive. And in a game where it may even loop... But still a banger.

What's this?! A new DavidOrr song! Hmmmmmmmmmm!

(or have I just been out of the loop and something other is your main distributing platform?)

Anyways, this is epic!

This is very, very good. I mean it REALLY looks like Earth. Though I have a feeling that this is in a corner of a room, because of the hard edge on the right middle in the background and because of the reflection. And the mist is not that interesting... I know that it is as in real life but still it feels lacking. Overall though I really adore this piece.

I don't really like that strong straight line in the middle. The other two blends fine into the picture but that isn't.

It looks like a valley for me and I enjoy it.

Hey this is so cute!

I just didn't get the cube head. Why is it so important? She should have face I think. (And not just 2 'eyes') It could be coloured too.

Anyways looks nice so keep up the good work!